I think the gradient of the diagonal edge is too subtle, which kind of ruins the overall composition. If the angle were more pronounced, it might work. But the way it ended up, it just looks awkward. Like a teenager that hasn't fully grown into his or her body.
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"Then each time Fleetwood would be not so much overcome by remorse as bedazzled at having been shown the secret backlands of wealth, and how sooner or later it depended on some act of murder, seldom limited to once."
Against the Day, Thomas Pynchon
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