Salt Lake City Project Video update for 2007.

SLC Projects · #1 Posted **Feb 2, 2007, 5:08 AM**

OK just for fun I did a project video of salt lake city as well as utah county. This video goes over new highrises that Salt Lake and Lehi could be getting within the next few years. I've done pics in the past so this video thing is new to me.

Here is the link to the video of what we get to look forward to...
http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fu...oid=1863588499

i-215 · #2 Posted **Feb 2, 2007, 5:19 AM**

Dang it! Blocked by my ISP. Can you post it on Google Video?

SLC Projects · #3 Posted **Feb 2, 2007, 12:54 PM**

That's odd.

It works just fine on my computer. Did anyone else had issues with the link?

Makid · #4 Posted **Feb 2, 2007, 2:15 PM**

The link opens for me, but the video doesn't load

delts145 · #5 Posted **Feb 2, 2007, 2:24 PM**

Great work SLC, All worked fine for me. Does everyone have Quicktime and or Real Player installed?

Makid · #6 Posted **Feb 2, 2007, 3:17 PM**

I have them installed at home. The firewall at work won't allow me to view the page let alone the video.

alphawolf · #7 Posted **Feb 2, 2007, 4:17 PM**

Worked for me.

Utaaah! · #8 Posted **Feb 2, 2007, 4:47 PM**

Nice work on the video! (But please run spell check once in a while.)

DevdogAZ · #9 Posted **Feb 2, 2007, 5:51 PM**

Love the updates. But I agree with Utaaah! about the spelling (and grammar) and I'm not sure 7 stories counts as "high rise."

Keep up the video updates. They're fun to watch.

i-215 · #10 Posted **Feb 2, 2007, 7:43 PM**

I can see it if it's posted on Google Video. Any chance of uploading there? I'd love to see it.

SLC Projects · #11 Posted **Feb 2, 2007, 11:02 PM**

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Originally Posted by DevdogAZ

Love the updates. But I agree with Utaaah! about the spelling (and grammar) and I'm not sure 7 stories counts as "high rise."

Keep up the video updates. They're fun to watch.

Spelling? Grammar?

Both looked fine to me. As for the 7-stories metro sure not a high rise, But I still like the project itself.
I'm sure the video still needs some work done. But not bad I think for the first time trying out Windows movie maker.

DevdogAZ · #12 Posted **Feb 3, 2007, 8:47 AM**

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Originally Posted by SLC Projects

Spelling? Grammar?

Both looked fine to me.

I love your video and I just want it to look more professional. Below are the transcripts of the title cards with errors. The bold indicates the corrections I have made. Some are actual mistakes, while others are simply style suggestions. Do with my suggestions as you choose.

The last office high-rise that was buil[b]t[b] in downtown Salt Lake was back in 1998...

The last hotel high-rise was the Grand America[no "n"] Hotel that opened in 2001...

Salt Lake City hasn't seen a new high-rise for over six years...

Let the construction begin[no "e"]!!!

In December of 2006, The Inn at Temple Square came down...

Then in February[? it's not Feb. yet and they've already started taking the parking garage down], the Crossroads Mall started to come down to make way for the City Creek Project. On 100 South, a 32-story condo tower will be built.

There has been talk that a Tower 3 . . .

Other projects include[no "s"]:

222 South Main Office Tower
21[no "-"] Stories
We are just waiting for those pussies at Hamilton Partners to break[space]ground.

The Metro Condos
7[no "-"] Stories

University Hospital Expansion
6[no "-"] stories on both wings

But Salt Lake City isn't the only city scheduled to get some new high-rises...

January 31, 2007, Frank Gehry unveiled a master plan that will give Lehi a new tallest building in Utah.

45-story five-star hotel

and Pleasant Grove will be getting two high-rise hotels:
14-story "Embassy Suites Hotel"

"Gehry's 45-story Hotel in Lehi" and "Embassy Suites Hotel and Marriott Hotel in Pleasant[space] Grove

As we start to add over 7 new high-rises to the area. This final sentence isn't a complete sentence. It appears that it should be a second clause of the sentence preceding it, but if that's the case, the first one shouldn't end in a period.]

I hope you don't take offense at my pointing out the errors. I just want your excellent work to look a little more polished.

SLC Projects · #13 Posted **Feb 3, 2007, 1:05 PM**

Wow, ok.

I did take another look at the video after I make my last post. I did notice some like I forgot the "H" in has. I tend to make little mistake when I'm typing too fast. But thinks for pointing those out. I do have it all save on window movie maker so I can go back and edit some things.
Somehow now I'm going to have to add that new 33 story ( within the - ) that will be build on 400 south and state to the video some how.

Anyway thanks.

DevdogAZ · #14 Posted **Feb 3, 2007, 4:31 PM**

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Originally Posted by SLC Projects

Wow, ok.

I did take another look at the video after I make my last post. I did notice some like I forgot the "H" in has. I tend to make little mistake when I'm typing too fast. But thinks for pointing those out. I do have it all save on window movie maker so I can go back and edit some things.
Somehow now I'm going to have to add that new 33 story ( within the - ) that will be build on 400 south and state to the video some how.

Anyway thanks.

My pleasure. Glad to be of help. Let us know if you post a new version with the 4th South building (once there are any details about it).

SLC Projects · #15 Posted **Feb 3, 2007, 10:33 PM**

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Originally Posted by DevdogAZ

My pleasure. Glad to be of help. Let us know if you post a new version with the 4th South building (once there are any details about it).

Sure, I hope we get some Rendings soon for that 33 story building.
It's all a working progress.